This week we had a writing task called Hide and Seek. For this writing task we had to recall a time we have been playing a game of Hide and Seek or Spotlight and use describing words and the 5 senses.
I wrote about a time me and some of my family members played Spotlight when we were staying in Motueka for new years. I did have a bit of trouble fitting the senses in but I still enjoyed writing and would recommend giving it a go yourself.
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Hey Jasmine,I love the detail in your poem like how you wrote about everyone's expressions
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jasmine,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your Hide and Seek writing. You did a good job of "showing not telling". I might take your advice and have a go writing one myself but I think the last time I played Spotlight was about 40 years ago! I'm looking forward to reading your next blog post.
Bye, Mrs Gully
Hi Jasmine,Abbie here.
ReplyDeleteI really like your hide and seek poem and how much detail you put into it.
I can tell how scared you must have been when your grandad came out from the bushes!Did you find it funny afterwards?
from Abbie